My mistake, i beg your forgiveness

here's my bio. Tried to make him offset Lady Winter, even if his is just a low Colonel
Knight-Commander Fallak LeVanBaron’s Eldest
Commanding Officer of the 232nd Fenn Rifles
Glory Hound
Loyal DogAppearance: Sir LeVan is tall, broad, and heavy set. He boasts a face covered in scars and burns, a shaved head, and a near perpetual bead growth. The knight-commander’s eyes are a brilliant green, shinning from a head disfigured by war. He has an incredibly muscular build, a result of a lifetime of training since birth to be a warrior. Fallak walks with an air of superiority bred into him since his childhood on Fenn. He is a giant, towering over his men. When he walks it is said the earth trembles and even the bravest will not meet the burning gaze of his eyes. This however, is most likely exadgeration, despite whatever presence he does hold.
The Knight-Commander is accompanied by Squire-Adjacent Dominic, a young man, thin and wiry, Master of the Banner Vonborin, a handsome charming man, High Yeoman Baens, a short stocky commoner, Signalman Corin, another commoner, and Father Lorzana.
Fennari regiments
There is a great divide between the appearance (in and out of battle) between the noble officers and the common, generally serf soldiers. The nobles fight in ornate carapace armor and high quality power and bolt weapons while at all other times they wear a mixtures of fabrics and furs. Of the commoners the only similarities in uniform are large brown trench coats, each man supplements himself with whatever he thinks can protect him and what he can find or purchase. This leads to a mixture of flack-jackets as well as wrought metal and leather armor. They generally wear metal wide brimmed, sallet helmets and are for the most part armed with stub weaponry, as opposed to las based ones. The armor and arms of the common soldier will differ from regiment to regiment as some lords will dig deeper into their pockets than others for the protection of their men. LeVan’s soldier are not the worst protected, but they maintain stubguns and crude, heavy plate armor due to the limited purse of their commanding officer. Throughout all Fenn regiments there are a great number of priests, following the Church of the Emperor Ascendant, the cult prominent on Fenn. All Fennari are deeply religious, regardless of which fief or dukedom they come from.EquipmentIn battle he dons the silver, gold trimmed carapace armor passed down through his family for generations, a hand and a half power sword that was the ancient heirloom of his forefather Lord General Doan LeVan, defender of Fenn and Commander of the Mustered Legions. He also carries a bolt-pistol, the same carried by his grandfather on the fields of Ullor.
His dress uniform consists of a ceremonial green jacket that can barely seem to contain him, and black pants. The pistol and sword are both sheathed in ornate leather and bronze and he wears on his head and iron ringlet signifying his service to the Emperor in battle.
PersonalityDespite his brutal appearance LeVan is a kind and gentle man, he cares about his men, both noble and common (albeit to different degrees) and is fiercely loyal to them and others that come from Fenn. He is a deeply religious man, occasionally quoting scripture when confronted or yelled at. The Knight-Commander is a learned, cultured man, a near polar opposite what he looks like.
In battle, or when he gets heavily drunk, he is a vicious killer, using any means to kill his foe. While his personal weapons are formidable he has been rumored to have strangled an ork to death during the Veraya Campaign and was personally seen to beat several greenskins to death with his bolt pistol. His Squire-Adjacent tries his hardest to keep the Commander from drinking as there is a bad history, though a hushed up one, of drunken rages that have left several dead and injured.
Biography Born to Baron Saulan LeVan in the rocky northern baronies of Fenn’s main continent he was raised from birth to be a warrior and a leader of men. Fallak always hated his father, a man he viewed as a weakling because he did not serve the Emperor. When the 232nd Rifles was mustered he gladly left his homeworld behind, eager to live up to the names of his long line of Imperial Guard ancestors, the common serfs and men at arms drafted to serve in the newly founded regiment were not as pleased.
In his first campaign on Veraya against the orks the young man got his first taste of modern Imperial war. He loved it, leading his men through some of the toughest fighting seen by the Guard forces in the history of that conflict. The 232nd was present at the storming of Uan’s Rock, where the ork Warlord choose to make his stand and the Knight-Commander slew dozens of greenskins personally. Despite the advance of his men, a different regiment, the 89th Zian Old-Guard were responsible for the death of the warlord, leaving LeVan feeling cheated and humiliated.
When the ten remaining Fenn regiments on Veraya were sent to the Olynthus subsector LeVan knew the Emperor had given him another chance to find glory. He is anxious for the conflict, ready to kill in His name.
- And there arose from the abyss a terrible beast and the armies of man were laid low by the walls of the ancient city. The ground shook and the skies trembled and all knew as the beast had come forth and that the end of time was upon them.
"Shadow is always right, except when he tries to save his men from charging orks" - Ang